| "Birches" is a memorable poem
that is rich and interesting enough to repay more than one reading. Robert Frost provides
vivid images of birches in order to oppose life's harsh realities with the human actions
of the imagination. I recommend this poem to
anyone interested in reading and studying poetry that meets many requirements for
excellence. However, it can not be understood from a quick once-over in a classroom. Its
meaning can only be revealed by reading it over and over in a quiet setting.
"Birches" has a profound theme and its sounds,
rhythm, form, tone, and figures of speech emphasize this meaning.
Theme
"Birches" provides an interesting aspect of imagination to oppose reality.
Initially, reality is pictured as birches bending and cracking from the load of ice after
a freezing rain.
They are dragged to the withered bracken by the load
And they seem not to break; though once they are bowed
So low for long, they never right themselves:
Reality has its ups and downs. This passage suggests that people never fully recover from
being dragged down by life even if they don't seem broken.
Imagination is portrayed as "a swinger of birches." The portrayal of the boy
refines this image:
One by one he subdued his father's trees
By riding them down over and over again.
The boy seems to take in lessons about life from these encounters with the trees on his
father's land:
He learned all there was
To learn about not launching out too soon.
This boy lives away from town and must play by himself. He has learned his father's
lessons. Imagination is the gift for escaping reality that each one of us possesses. We do
not have to depend on anyone to take a mental vacation. Mastering your art of imagination
will increase your ability to handle the bad things life dishes out.
That's why the narrator advocates using imagination. On Earth we can become weary from
life's everyday occurrences--that "pathless wood." However, Earth's the place
for love--not hate, weariness, or any negative feelings. Therefore, use imagination to
come back to reality relaxed. At the end, the narrator imagines climbing the birch tree
"Toward heaven"--to the top and
swinging a branch down to the ground. Suddenly he sounds relaxed and carefree. Isn't this
better than the villain "Truth"? It sounds like imagination works.
CONSIDERATIONS OF CRAFT
Sound
Often you must have seen them
Loaded with ice a sunny winter morning
After a rain.
This passage begins the visual journey through the woods. In this journey, Frost wants the
reader to see the birches as they really are and as they seem in a series of pleasant
images. Part of the realism comes from the sound of passages like this one:
They click upon themselves
As the breeze rises, and turn many-colored
As the stir cracks and crazes their enamel.
Soon the sun's warmth makes them shed crystal shells
Shattering and avalaching on the snow crust--
Frost's alliteration--here the repetition of /z/ and /s/ and /k/ sounds--lets us hear as
well as see the birch trees after a freezing rain and the morning after as the melting
begins. The /k/ sound in "crack" and "crazes" mimics the sound of the
ice in the breeze "shattering" and crashing "on the snow crust." It
also imitates the crunch of snow under the weight of boots. The /s/ and /z/ sounds suggest
the rising breeze--his use of /s/ sounds increases as it rises. These sounds also
suggest the scratch and swish of birch branches scraped on the crust. Perhaps they also
imitate the swish of layers of warm garments rubbing together as you walk.
These sounds contribute to the tone, or attitude, concerning "Truth," or
reality. The upheaval caused by the breeze and the sun's warmth portray a shattered,
uncomfortable feeling. Life is full its peaceful ups; however, it also consists of
shattering downs.
Rhythm and Form
"Birches" consists mainly of blank verse: unrimed iambic pentameter, as in the
lines below.
........../.........../............/........../............/
When I see birches bend to left and right
......../.............../........../............./.........../
Across the lines of straighter darker trees,
However, Frost deviates from this pattern to emphasize certain lines that give clues to
the theme. Lines 3, 5, 23, and 30 each contain the word "them," meaning the
birches. Lines 14 and 15 rime and also deviate from the pattern of iambic pentameter:
................../......................../............../........../............/
They are dragged to the withered bracken by the load
.........../........./................./.................../.................../
And they seem not to break; though once they are bowed
The meaning reflected in the lines scanned above plus the next line: "So low for
long, they never right themselves:" add up to dramatize what life's "downs"
will do to a person.
Lines 42, 50, and 54 contain the rimes be, me, and tree, which emphasize that the narrator
wishes to be in his imagination, that he identifies with the imaginary boy who was "a
swinger of birches."
Tone
The poem communicates an attitude about imagination and reality. The choice of certain
words and certain details makes it clear that the speaker prefers imagination but is aware
of reality.
Initially, the forest scene describes "crystal shells/ Shattering and avalanching on
the snow crust--/ Such heaps of broken glass to sweep away." The words
"shattering and avalanching" give the feeling of calamity and perhaps fear or
sorrow. A disturbance in the universe is suggested by the "heaps of broken
glass" that make it seem as if "the inner dome of heaven had fallen." Since
Truth is linked to the ice storm, the speaker sees that the reality is that ice storms
have bent down the birches.
There is a turning point that informs the reader that the villain "Truth" has
butted into the poem. The speaker, who was getting whimsical and nostalgic about girls
drying their long hair "in the sun," admits that "Truth broke in/ With all
her matter-of-fact about the ice storm." But now it's imagination's turn. The
speaker's huffiness about truth pushes reality aside for the more refreshing view of
imagination.
The comforting image of the boy who "one by one . . . subdued his father's
trees" pits art against the destructive chaos of reality. The boy refines his art of
imagination by persistence--
And not one but hung limp, not one was left
For him to conquer. He learned all there was
To learn . . . .
This scene is softer than the scene of the ice storms in lines 5 - 15. But the point of
this opposition between imagination and reality, the boy vs. the ice storm, doesn't come
until years later at the end of the poem.
The frustration of life sometimes makes it "too much like a pathless wood."
After disclosing that he himself has been "a swinger of birches" the speaker
confesses that he yearns to return to those days in his imagination to get away from the
frustrations, the shatterings of real life. The last line, "One could do worse than
to be a swinger of birches," sounds relaxed, thoughtful, resolved. After having taken
a mental vacation into the forest, the narrator comes back to reality refreshed, ready for
love and ready to face reality again.
Isn't this one purpose of all art--paintings, movies, literature, sculpture, music--to
refresh us by drawing on our imaginations so that we can use our dreams or our memories to
survive day-to-day, matter-of-fact reality? "Birches" is no ode to winter; it is
more a tribute to the power of imagination.
Figures of Speech
Frost uses several figures of speech to stress certain points and add freshness to the
poem. For instance, Frost gives human qualities to "Truth" in the
personification about interrupting. This striking personification alerts the reader that
"Truth," or reality, is a major part of the theme for this poem.
Similes heighten both sides of the contrast between truth/reality and imagination/memory.
The nostalgic image of "girls on their hands and knees that throw their hair/ Before
them over their heads to dry in the sun" begins with the simile-signal
"like." When describing life "like a pathless wood," Frost uses
imagination to depict reality. So imagination even subdues or overcomes reality.
The last line, "One could do worse than to be a swinger of birches," understates
the theme. If imagination can be equated with art, the last line may suggest that one
could end up in a worse life pursuit than being an artist, or a poet.
Major Assets
"Birches" is a memorable poem. It is lengthy and complicated enough to give the
reader something to discover every time it is read.
In the poem, Frost uses several tools of the poetic craft to depict the theme.
"Birches," written in generally unrimed iambic pentameter, includes rimes and
variations in rhythm that stress major points of the theme.
"Birches" also contains several figures of speech and vivid language to depict
reality and the power of the imagination.
A good poem should stir the reader and touch the emotions. This poem advocates using the
imagination to deal with life's downs. In today's harsh, hectic world, this message
definitely hits home.
Major Drawbacks
One major drawback of "Birches" is that the reader must be careful not to take
the wording literally, at face value. "So was I once myself a swinger of
birches" does not necessarily mean that the narrator used to hang off of trees like
Snoopy, and the statement "And so I dream of going back to be" does not
necessarily mean that the speaker wants to climb a birch tree. The important word is
"dream." It's our dreams that steel us against the branches of reality that lash
across our open eyes.
The poem must be reread again and again to see what the narrator is referring to by taking
each statement in the context of surrounding lines and the larger context of the whole
poem. The narrator has been imaginative, has subdued reality with the power of the dream,
and so he wishes to again.
Another example lies in the line "One by one he subdued his father's trees." We
know the ice storms bent the trees, that the boy did not conquer his father's forest.
Instead the reader must reread to find that with imagination the boy is able to subdue
life's downside, perhaps overcoming the setbacks that his father endured and may now
afflict the speaker, who dreams of using imagination to overcome difficult times.
It is also hard for a first-year college student to get past the pretty nature poetry. I
could picture a winter scene: "As the breeze rises" and the effect of "the
sun's warmth" on the sheaths of ice covering the tree branches. But this is where I
ended the scene. I did not picture the shattering of ice "on the snow crust"
like "heaps of broken glass to sweep away." Initially, I did not get the
shattered feeling; I felt the scene was peaceful.
Conclusion
I enjoyed reading "Birches," and I believe my reaction is both personal and
aesthetic. This poem was lengthy and complex enough to contain many of the aesthetics of
an excellent poem. I will always remember the vivid images provided by Frost's use of
figures of speech and sound.
This poem also stirred my feelings. I work in a very high-pressure business environment
and sometimes I escape by daydreaming. I long for the day when I have my own business.
I believe my reaction is not typical of first-year students; most would be "put
off" by this poem's length and complexity. Many, however, would look at this poem as
a possible wealth of information or as a manual for defending oneself against the onrush
of reality. |